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Critique needed

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RED ROBOT

Hello there.

This is a very very rough cut without any color correction/grading or any post work at all including audio , for me they'll play a huge part.
Can you tell me if this is too boring for you ? I made this with the little help of my brother who is into filmmaking also.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1Zz0apCO4o


You're not going to get it but basically at the end the man sees a news report about 2 people getting killed in a robbery and they show his picture.


Thanks .
 
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IndiePaul said:
Cool.

For your info: Your video was Private and inaccessible.
Click to expand...


I actually made it private after I got the critique I needed because I'd rather shoot myself in the face than seeing how hundreds of people are seeing this horrible short. :lol:


Thanks anyways buddy :yes:
 
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