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story Crafting a Scene: Standup in a Prison Colony

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I'm just trying to think of everything you can do with this.

  • They attack the comic with projectiles
  • The guards fire a warning shot after too insulting a joke: then tell him to keep going
  • The comic's physicality... I would do it just enough to be threatening but meagre enough to be vulnerable.
  • The comic should somehow knock someone the fuck out during his routine, but it has to be in a way you're not expecting.
  • The comic is your adrenaline junkie fun at all costs kind of guy
  • Someone has a snake: it becomes a part of the act
 
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