archived-videos Cookie Monster (2015) - Dark Comedy Short

nice work! shots made sense, story moved well, performances worked, and was funny

needs work: weird color grade, yellow-y blown out edges in some shots. as far as the story, you hinted well that the adult woman was the girl scouts mom, but you could have been less obvious about it at the end. just my two cents about a small thing
 
Good story, good actors. The actors and direction really made this.

Few strange angles, colour grading and general camerawork pulled me out here and there but those actors and the direction were strong.
 
Thanks for the kind words. And I can definitely agree with you guys on the color grading and the camerawork.

About revealing the woman being the mom, I intentionally wanted to make it pretty clear. Did you mean when all three are at the door?
 
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