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watch (COMPETITION WINNER) Change of Plan: A Cinematic Action Short

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EnactionStudios

I am a college student trying to better my craft by maintaining a YouTube channel called Enaction Studios. This 2-minute short is probably my best work, which I wrote, directed, and edited for a small competition with a fellow filmmaker. My hope is that you would watch and critique it, so I can improve on my next one. If you like it, why not subscribe? I upload a new vid every 2 weeks on Mondays.

KNOWN PROBLEMS:
-The way the rifle is held is VERY wrong.
-Said rifle would not have such a dramatic effect it has on its target. (The rifle I needed did not come in time)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n6hafC5mMuk

Any constructive criticism is appreciated!
 
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