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Civil War Short Film

Nice job Gareth. I did catch some problems with period issues. The shirts looked pretty modern, the knife looked contemporary, the matches in the basement seemed to be from a book of matches, the handcuffs looked contemporary, the gun looked like a British Webley (off the top of my head...but it didn't look period).

All of that is I'm sure budgetary. I only bring it up just in case you didn't catch them.

Nice shots and lighting. And a great effort!

Good luck with your next one!

Chris
 
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