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Check out New Music Video We Shot

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=62So2-AOxQs
Check out the new video we did for rapper Jakob22
As the song is called Circus the imagery is self explanatory

Would love some critiques
 
A little on the nose, don't you think? (Pun intended, but really...)

I only watched about half because I cannot stand rap, and that's as far as I could force myself to go. What I saw, though, was literal video. Mention a lion, show a lion. Mention the crowd, show the crowd. Mention cotton candy, show cotton candy.

A more metaphorical representation of life's circus, without such literal interpretation, would be more effective.
 
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AcousticAl said:
A little on the nose, don't you think? (Pun intended, but really...)

I only watched about half because I cannot stand rap, and that's as far as I could force myself to go. What I saw, though, was literal video. Mention a lion, show a lion. Mention the crowd, show the crowd. Mention cotton candy, show cotton candy.

A more metaphorical representation of life's circus, without such literal interpretation, would be more effective.
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Hope you like our new music video more and appreciate the feedback
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wGoKi4YzEQg
 
Wow,the what a dope beat in second song. I still can't believe it is the same person who sings the first one wtf.
 
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