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Here's my latest attempt to keep moving forward in the efforts to someday make my movie. It's just a short segment of a night at the local car show, but I've made efforts to get audio, framing, and overall continuity as professional as I can. I found a few areas to improve, anyone care to give some constructive criticism?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=watch?v=xXeAEQS4VpQ
 
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OK, how about "destructive" criticism? Focus needs improvement, song choices could have been way better, music volume/audio overlap needs tightening up... I did do a walk down the center of the road with 4 lanes of traffic rolling by but all the footage was unusable for me since I have no way of stabilizing it. Pity as there were some decent shot I would have loved to use to make it look less like a bystander video.
 
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