archived-videos CAPTURED - Short Horror Film

[alexrokz]

2 teenagers wake up in a dark room with no way out.

Made as part of my film class.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&list=UUqCenJsKP2FcbT9Q4KcNBZw&v=l6GrvfAvzyM

It was shot and edited in about 8 hours like my last post, so please excuse any rough edges!

Thanks people.

 

[cjnixon]

I watched your last one too. Cant help but noticing the same story.

In both, you've got good shots, decent lighting, but they were the same story.
You said they were for class. So maybe that was part of the rules, but you need to invest in some storyline and plot. I understand being indie and the where are we story is cheap and easy but im sure you can come up with something original. and when you do i bet its hellagood.

 

[charlescfilm]

I watched your last one too. Cant help but noticing the same story.

In both, you've got good shots, decent lighting, but they were the same story.
You said they were for class. So maybe that was part of the rules, but you need to invest in some storyline and plot. I understand being indie and the where are we story is cheap and easy but im sure you can come up with something original. and when you do i bet its hellagood.

They did some cool stuff with the lighting. Personally I don't think the story matters with a film like this. The only thing they need to do is make something longer. This would work great if it was women that were trapped and there was some sort of sicko waiting in the shadows.

Good job guys check out my post and watch my short.

 

[alexrokz]

I watched your last one too. Cant help but noticing the same story.

In both, you've got good shots, decent lighting, but they were the same story.
You said they were for class. So maybe that was part of the rules, but you need to invest in some storyline and plot. I understand being indie and the where are we story is cheap and easy but im sure you can come up with something original. and when you do i bet its hellagood.

Ah yes I probably should have mentioned, I made both as part of a film class, and the task was basically to keep the same story whilst changing up the location, so that was deliberate But thanks for the feedback!