Please ignore the format or the spelling/grammar, it will be corrected, and it's not in english anyway.
do you think the conflict and the resolution are fine? its for a conflict short movie i should do for university next week.
Thanks.
1. Out. First desert area. Day
Yossi, 26, a nice guy but also tough when necessary and Yaron, 27, a geek who tries to be cool, standing in a desolate area, Yaron's old car in the background is smoking with open hood.
Yossi
I knew I should not travel with you.
Yaron
What do you want? You wanted me to bring the car.
Yossi
You could not check all fuel water oil properly before?
Yaron
Ok then what do we do now?
Yossi looks at his mobile phone.
Yossi
Pick up only here in the Jordanian network.. Go to the gas station and get the stuff.
Yaron
It's really far!
Yossi
Not really.. 40 minutes and you're there. If you run, 20 minutes.
Yaron
You go!
Yossi gives Yaron the "do what I tell you before you'll regret it" look.
Yossi
Because of who are we stuck here? because of me or because of you? Come on I'm waiting for you here.
2. Out. Second desert area. Day
Yaron walking in the desert to the gas station .. He is tired and barely moving, very warm. Is sweating and all red.
Yaron (V.O)
Why should I listen to it all the time, because once he saved my life? He never saved me, the fact that he snatched the bee in the Amazonas that does not mean it would have killed me, it's just a bee .. I'm not even allergic to bees.. I'm tired of his nonsense.
3. Out. First desert area. Day
Yossi sitting on a rock, lights a cigarette, playing music on his mobile phone.
4. Out. Gas station. Day
Yaron comes to the gas station. Buys a bottle of water and goes out. He sees that he's money ran out.
5. Out. First desert area. Day
Yossi looks at the time and sees that Yaron had not come back for nearly two hours. He walks toward the car and urinates in the fuel filler. After he pees, he closes the hood, enters the car. Trying to ignite the car, it works, and he drives to the gas station.
6. Out. Road opposite the gas station. Day
Yossi is in the car, and he sees Yaron playing backgammon with somebody there.
Yossi
What an asshole ... he can go look for his car now ..
7. Out. Gas station. Day
Yaron playing backgammon with some shady guy at the gas station, Yaron mixes the dice, throws, and gets six - six. Yaron wins the game.
Yaron
There! So we agreed you fix the car and take back me and my friend home.. Our destination will not be reached today.
Shady guy
Believe me, how lucky you are, I stand for my word.. Come on Come on, where do you live, tel aviv? ...
Yaron and the dubious guy leave the table.
End.
do you think the conflict and the resolution are fine? its for a conflict short movie i should do for university next week.
Thanks.
1. Out. First desert area. Day
Yossi, 26, a nice guy but also tough when necessary and Yaron, 27, a geek who tries to be cool, standing in a desolate area, Yaron's old car in the background is smoking with open hood.
Yossi
I knew I should not travel with you.
Yaron
What do you want? You wanted me to bring the car.
Yossi
You could not check all fuel water oil properly before?
Yaron
Ok then what do we do now?
Yossi looks at his mobile phone.
Yossi
Pick up only here in the Jordanian network.. Go to the gas station and get the stuff.
Yaron
It's really far!
Yossi
Not really.. 40 minutes and you're there. If you run, 20 minutes.
Yaron
You go!
Yossi gives Yaron the "do what I tell you before you'll regret it" look.
Yossi
Because of who are we stuck here? because of me or because of you? Come on I'm waiting for you here.
2. Out. Second desert area. Day
Yaron walking in the desert to the gas station .. He is tired and barely moving, very warm. Is sweating and all red.
Yaron (V.O)
Why should I listen to it all the time, because once he saved my life? He never saved me, the fact that he snatched the bee in the Amazonas that does not mean it would have killed me, it's just a bee .. I'm not even allergic to bees.. I'm tired of his nonsense.
3. Out. First desert area. Day
Yossi sitting on a rock, lights a cigarette, playing music on his mobile phone.
4. Out. Gas station. Day
Yaron comes to the gas station. Buys a bottle of water and goes out. He sees that he's money ran out.
5. Out. First desert area. Day
Yossi looks at the time and sees that Yaron had not come back for nearly two hours. He walks toward the car and urinates in the fuel filler. After he pees, he closes the hood, enters the car. Trying to ignite the car, it works, and he drives to the gas station.
6. Out. Road opposite the gas station. Day
Yossi is in the car, and he sees Yaron playing backgammon with somebody there.
Yossi
What an asshole ... he can go look for his car now ..
7. Out. Gas station. Day
Yaron playing backgammon with some shady guy at the gas station, Yaron mixes the dice, throws, and gets six - six. Yaron wins the game.
Yaron
There! So we agreed you fix the car and take back me and my friend home.. Our destination will not be reached today.
Shady guy
Believe me, how lucky you are, I stand for my word.. Come on Come on, where do you live, tel aviv? ...
Yaron and the dubious guy leave the table.
End.