I have just written a brief outline of what i want my film idea for a script to be like. Please leave honest opinions on the below text. Would like to know if it sounds like a good plot idea, and other suggestions you can think of 
The story centres around young adult Lewis who is 18 years old. The plot is about how Lewis waking up on a path with no recollection of how he got there. The last memory he has is a phone conversation with his girlfriend which results in there break up. But what happened between then and the event which causes him memory trauma is unknown. He then starts being accused of his ex-girlfriends disappearance by many people including the guy who has always fancied her and destroyed there friendship because he got the girl, the brother of the girl and soon his friends start to turn on him. He then starts receiving death threats through his door and then when someone starts to take matters into there own hands, Lewis has to fear for his safety and life when they begin to stalk him which gradually starts becoming frequent and often. He soon loses trust in some of his long time friends and starts to become paranoid. The question is, How did he lose vital memory’s from the night before, he is wanting his blood for something he doesn’t know if he did or not and what really happened to his ex-girlfriend.
The story centres around young adult Lewis who is 18 years old. The plot is about how Lewis waking up on a path with no recollection of how he got there. The last memory he has is a phone conversation with his girlfriend which results in there break up. But what happened between then and the event which causes him memory trauma is unknown. He then starts being accused of his ex-girlfriends disappearance by many people including the guy who has always fancied her and destroyed there friendship because he got the girl, the brother of the girl and soon his friends start to turn on him. He then starts receiving death threats through his door and then when someone starts to take matters into there own hands, Lewis has to fear for his safety and life when they begin to stalk him which gradually starts becoming frequent and often. He soon loses trust in some of his long time friends and starts to become paranoid. The question is, How did he lose vital memory’s from the night before, he is wanting his blood for something he doesn’t know if he did or not and what really happened to his ex-girlfriend.
