Need an honest opinion about this 5 page screenplay.
I'm posting it as the reply to a jamesonfirstshot.com competition.
the rule is to write a short 5-7 page screenplay, inspired by a tall tale (tall tale of my choice was "Old Stormalong and Octopus")
Main idea behind the screenplay is how men sometimes expected to enjoy certain activities, even when they don't really like it.
Short story about soon to be son-in-law meeting his fiances father for the first time.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B0mxCCM9gdK3NGI5YWVkZWMtMTA1NC00OGYwLTgwOGItNWRhM2MxYzU2MDRk
What do you think? Was it interesting to you or funny?
I'm posting it as the reply to a jamesonfirstshot.com competition.
the rule is to write a short 5-7 page screenplay, inspired by a tall tale (tall tale of my choice was "Old Stormalong and Octopus")
Main idea behind the screenplay is how men sometimes expected to enjoy certain activities, even when they don't really like it.
Short story about soon to be son-in-law meeting his fiances father for the first time.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B0mxCCM9gdK3NGI5YWVkZWMtMTA1NC00OGYwLTgwOGItNWRhM2MxYzU2MDRk
What do you think? Was it interesting to you or funny?
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