Bitten ~ My 1st Screenplay ~ Please Read

[Manio]

Title: Bitten
Genre: Horror/Thriller
Pages: 32
Synopsis: Bitten is a screenplay revolving around creatures from legends, and myth called Werewolves. The synopsis is, after a class lesson a girl named Stephanie becomes instantly interested in the culture of Werewolves. She then meets an odd boy named Cole, who helps her understand the myths and lore of lycanthrophy. Soon, people start disappearing and dying and its up to Cole and Stephanie to figure out what's going on.
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I hope you guys like it, it's roughly 34 pages long. Any comments and criticisms would be appreciated

Screenplay: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=2KP4AGK9
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I'll take the criticism well, so I can't wait to see what everyone thinks.

 

[Ernest Worthing]

Haven't read it yet but does Cole turn out to be werewolf?

 

[Manio]

Haven't read it yet but does Cole turn out to be werewolf?

I don't want to spoil anything, so you're gonna have to read it

 

[Ernest Worthing]

Far more experienced ppl here will help you out, im sure.

Ill see if i can take a look at it later when i have the time.

But congrats on finishing your first screenplay!

 

[Manio]

Thanks for the congratulations, that means a lot!