archived-videos amateur slapstick movie a made

[moviemaker1992]

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[Will Vincent]

It is not in HD but the picture is not that bad.

Might not be "that bad" but it's really not all that good either.

Please give some comments how i can improve on it.

Oh... where to begin...

The audio is pretty horrific. The sound effects often don't match the action. No effort was put into lighting, the camera angles are boring, the vfx.. 90% of them... no, just.. no.

I'd like my minute and a half back.