• ✅ Technical and creative solutions for your film.
    ✅ Screenplay formatting help, plot and story guidance.
    ✅ A respectful community of professionals and newbies.
    ✅ Network with composers, editors, cast, crew, and more!
    🎬 IndieTalk - Filmmaking and Screenwriting help site and community.
    By filmmakers, for filmmakers since 2003

archived-videos amateur slapstick movie a made

moviemaker1992 said:
It is not in HD but the picture is not that bad.
Click to expand...
Might not be "that bad" but it's really not all that good either.

moviemaker1992 said:
Please give some comments how i can improve on it.
Click to expand...
Oh... where to begin...

The audio is pretty horrific. The sound effects often don't match the action. No effort was put into lighting, the camera angles are boring, the vfx.. 90% of them... no, just.. no.

I'd like my minute and a half back. :no:
 
Last edited:
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top