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[zan609]

This is our own video that inspired from The Raid : Redemption

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YEAMxhDeNzg


In The Raid You can see The SWAT but here we will give you The HANSIP (Hansip is a security person for a small district in Indonesia)

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Director: Eno Bening Swara
Cameraman: Ari R Hakim
Cast: Eno Bening Swara, Rasikh Fuadi, Adam Azano
Editor: Eno Bening Swara, Ari R Hakim
Sound: www.freeplaymusic.com, Muhammad Zainal

Recorded with: Canon EOS 550D
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[harpsichoid]

It was cool, but the overriding problem is that there is no real plot- you should think more about exciting and interesting the audience, as well as having fun filming.

Just making another point out of interest- Jihad is a really misunderstood term in the west. No problem for you if you plan to show this to an audience in Indonesia, but you should see the look of shock on the faces of people from America and Europe when it's used in a film! Sacha Baron Cohen made a good joke out of it.

 

[NickClapper]

I've spent a lot of time explaining why The Raid is my favourite film of 2012 so far and this is a pretty good attempt at recreating the 'feel'. You've got nice locations and it's pretty well filmed.

I think this would benefit enormously from proper sound design rather than 'whooshing' and 'thumping' sound effects.

 

[zan609]

It was cool, but the overriding problem is that there is no real plot- you should think more about exciting and interesting the audience, as well as having fun filming.

Just making another point out of interest- Jihad is a really misunderstood term in the west. No problem for you if you plan to show this to an audience in Indonesia, but you should see the look of shock on the faces of people from America and Europe when it's used in a film! Sacha Baron Cohen made a good joke out of it.

thanks to watch harpsichoid, yes we already realize there is no real plot in this film. it our first project in action movie. so wish me luck to make another action movie with more plot

 

[zan609]

I've spent a lot of time explaining why The Raid is my favorite film of 2012 so far and this is a pretty good attempt at recreating the 'feel'. You've got nice locations and it's pretty well filmed.

I think this would benefit enormously from proper sound design rather than 'whooshing' and 'thumping' sound effects.

Thanks To watch Nickclapper, we found this place accidentally, , and about the sound design, we lack of experience to make nice sound effect.

Thanks to every one that already watch our video, and sorry for my lack of ability to communicate in English language

 

[rayw]

Nah, your English is great.

Please consider entering 'The Unofficial Hansip (Parody of The Raid Redemption/Serbuan Maut)' on the 'Shot by a Canon' thread:
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=39721

For your next action piece you may want to consider copying a feature action scene shot-for-shot.
Try to recreate the blocking, movement, and especially the editing timing.

And you may already know there's a world of difference between gun fighting and fist fighting, so... yeah. Develop one style ---> move onto the next.


This seemed interesting https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ry0-LauGVU8

Might try this if your pistols allow it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V6Ru6xpH0Eo

 

[zan609]

Nah, your English is great.

Please consider entering 'The Unofficial Hansip (Parody of The Raid Redemption/Serbuan Maut)' on the 'Shot by a Canon' thread:
http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=39721

For your next action piece you may want to consider copying a feature action scene shot-for-shot.
Try to recreate the blocking, movement, and especially the editing timing.

And you may already know there's a world of difference between gun fighting and fist fighting, so... yeah. Develop one style ---> move onto the next.


This seemed interesting https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ry0-LauGVU8

Might try this if your pistols allow it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V6Ru6xpH0Eo

Ok bro, I will post it in your thread, thanks to watch my video ..

btw our next video about action will be finish about 2 month, and I will tell you and also post in your thread

 

[zan609]

feedback any one?

 

[zan609]

need more feed back

 

[zan609]

please more feedback.....