The added music sounds over the top as I LOVE the original without music. I believe in the power of music when combined with moments of silence.
The scenes are much more scarier without any music. For me the music is distracting and pulls me out of the scene instead of pulling me in. The scare moment at 2:50 got killed by the music.
If I close my eyes I see Mickey Mouse walking a scary scene to the pizzicato played violins. It just doesn't work for me, sorry.
Some advice, the music should be lower in volume in the beginning and ... less is more, there is a lot happening in your cue which distracts me. Strip it down to its bare minimum and make the music meet with what's happening on screen, leaving plenty of room for those scare moments.