The basic rule of thumb... Don't do it!
Addressing the reader in screenplay action/description is the use of words or phrases that speak directly to the reader.
For example...
Frank points the speeding car directly between two oncoming 18-WHEELERS... Will he make it?
When writing a spec screenplay, you should avoid addressing the reader because it interrupts, rather than advance the story and can be distracting. Avoid using questions in your action/description.
Stick to the third person singular:
Frank runs down the sidewalk.
Avoid the second person singular:
You see Frank run down the sidewalk.
Avoid the first person plural:
We see Frank run down the sidewalk.
Everything in your spec screenplay's action/description lines and paragraphs will be "seen." Using "we" not only addresses the reader but it also adds unnecessary words to an action/description sentence. Instead, concentrate on creating a compelling story consisting of unique, multi-dimensional characters.
People who read spec screenplays are professionals. They will able able to visualize what you write so avoid anything that intrudes on the story itself. Only things that can actually BE FILMED belong in action/description sentences and paragraphs...
filmy
Addressing the reader in screenplay action/description is the use of words or phrases that speak directly to the reader.
For example...
Frank points the speeding car directly between two oncoming 18-WHEELERS... Will he make it?
When writing a spec screenplay, you should avoid addressing the reader because it interrupts, rather than advance the story and can be distracting. Avoid using questions in your action/description.
Stick to the third person singular:
Frank runs down the sidewalk.
Avoid the second person singular:
You see Frank run down the sidewalk.
Avoid the first person plural:
We see Frank run down the sidewalk.
Everything in your spec screenplay's action/description lines and paragraphs will be "seen." Using "we" not only addresses the reader but it also adds unnecessary words to an action/description sentence. Instead, concentrate on creating a compelling story consisting of unique, multi-dimensional characters.
People who read spec screenplays are professionals. They will able able to visualize what you write so avoid anything that intrudes on the story itself. Only things that can actually BE FILMED belong in action/description sentences and paragraphs...
filmy