Sorry, I'm just being a dick, but in all seriousness...
You generally had one angle for each scene. Plus, what was with the little kid voice dub? Who knows? maybe we just have different senses of humor, but film-wise...the audio sounded internal, there was rarely a cut to a different angle, etc...
You should probably watch a couple of people's films on here and watch how they do their cuts and angles. Sorry if all that sounded mean, i'm just sayin'.