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watch A Traveller of a Different Kind

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Hey everybody!

I'd love it if you could check out the latest short that I created.
Am not a pro at editing, but have edited this myself. Any tips in context to editing that would help me improve is welcome.
Please feel free to share you feedback in general too.

https://vimeo.com/98316132

thanks in advance,
 
Especially at the beginning, the narration is a little quick.
Since you often cut on the word, the editing doesn't match the style of the poem - it should be a little calmer, I think.
 
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