Okay I tried very hard to read BUT a sp isn't a book - there are so many huge blocks of description and 'speeches' that I had to give up... sorry
If you must put long blocks in then try and break them up into bit sized pieces, 3-4 lines.
There is an enormous amount of flashbacks which not only add to the complication and effort to read but also millions to any potential shoot - which in of itself is something we all aspire too - however starting out, will lessen the chance of any potential interested party to produce.
As for the actual story and your approach, it never grab me, sorry.
And to be honest it seemed very 'preachy'.
One thing which did intrigue me was the way you put "g-d" and not "god"?
Are you deeply religious and unable to write god - hence the lack of an "o"?
Not that it matters if you are or not - but I think it illustrates to me that I found that missing "o'" more intriguging than your premise.
I really hope that you don't take any of the above as a personal slight against you - it's not, it's just one persons opinion to take or leave.
My feedback on huge blocks of text /dialogue is something I'm sure you're hear over and over.
And once you break them up, plus reduce the "speeches" - it'll be a much better draft I'm sure.
All the best, respectfully, Jim.