archived-videos 8 minute crime/drama character study

[Filmfan13]

Hey guys, Ive recently completed my third short film called The Dead of Winter and I'm hoping to get some feedback. It contains a little bit of bad language so viewer discretion is advised. Thanks for looking.

https://youtu.be/jnjf_bBVuuI

 

[Filman]

Yep. The kind one has to watch till the end to find out what's going on.

 

[Filmfan13]

Yep. The kind one has to watch till the end to find out what's going on.

Is that a bad thing? Did you like the movie?

 

[Filman]

Not bad. It means I think you're building the story darn well and I get curious to see what's more to come. I suppose I like the movie. Been writing so much that I don't watch like your intended target audience, so I don't really pay attention to if the film is in my liking or not. Mainly checking out how people do their things.

 

[Filmfan13]

Not bad. It means I think you're building the story darn well and I get curious to see what's more to come. I suppose I like the movie. Been writing so much that I don't watch like your intended target audience, so I don't really pay attention to if the film is in my liking or not. Mainly checking out how people do their things.

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you took notice to the structure of the story. I tried to put it together in such a way that the story would reveal itself in a unique and engaging way.