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watch 8 minute crime/drama character study

Not bad. It means I think you're building the story darn well and I get curious to see what's more to come. I suppose I like the movie. Been writing so much that I don't watch like your intended target audience, so I don't really pay attention to if the film is in my liking or not. Mainly checking out how people do their things.
 
Filman said:
Not bad. It means I think you're building the story darn well and I get curious to see what's more to come. I suppose I like the movie. Been writing so much that I don't watch like your intended target audience, so I don't really pay attention to if the film is in my liking or not. Mainly checking out how people do their things.
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Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you took notice to the structure of the story. I tried to put it together in such a way that the story would reveal itself in a unique and engaging way.
 
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