archived-videos 48 Hour film feedback

Me and my friends entered a 48 hour film festival recently and ended up winning first place for the high school category. I wrote, edited, directed, and composed the music for it all within the 48 hours. I would love if I could get some feedback and in particular constructive criticism about this project. There are a lot of things I didn't like about it and a lot of things I did like, such as the ending with the driving and the piano however, I would love to hear what you guys think and how I could improve this film. Here's the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ACphEiujyw
 
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