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archived-videos 3rd music video ever! Tell me what you think please!

You've got some interesting things going on, for sure. Really liked that swapping of people at the table, as the camera moves in. Also, groovy old-school titling graphics. It's almost C64 old. :)

Simple & mellow. Could have used more closeups of the singer, I guess. Almost none of those. Coolin' :cool:
 
I like it. I think you did a good job keeping it visually-engaging. I can see that you spent a lot of time on this, and your efforts paid off well.

By the way, your token white dude kinda looks like Dave Franco.

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