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archived-videos 1st Official Short - Dark Corridors

Eerie and surreal, but I wasn't sure what you were really going for here. Some of the shots are really nice, and the voice over was well done. Just wish there was more going on in the walking scene..
 
Thanks for watching.

I did want to reshoot the walking bits but time constraints, energy e.t.c made me keep them as they are.

Eerie and surreal was where I was going, if you threw disturbing into the mix, I'm a happy chappy.

Thanks again for the feedback.
 
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