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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    Hi again, Thanks for the great input l, it’s greatly appreciated. I actually already wrote the script before writing that one page document. It was written during the quarantine in march. I’d love to know your input on the 90 page script. I can also explain the title to you if you’d like lol...
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    Sorry for the confusion, I didn't know you can only send certain formats. Attached is a PDF Jason
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    Hello again Unknown Screenwriter, Sorry for the delay on the summary, i've been busy taking an online course. Attached is a summary based on the "one pager" link format you sent me. This document allows you have a better understanding of my feature script and hopefully attracts you to the idea...
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    Thank you. I'll look over these links and write up a synopsis for you to see. I appreciate the assistance.
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    How long does it have to be? What are the details? Thanks
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    Thank you. I'll post a synopsis soon.
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    I apologize. I'm kinda new to the logistics of marketing and whatnot. I used my "logline" as a way of perhaps showing a preview of the film concept to someone on here who'd be willing to read it and give me feedback. Thanks
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    Well I appreciate your honesty, and I understand you don't have time or interest to ready my script. It's cool. On the matter of being sellable, that's not at the top of my list. I want to create a movie that will be appreciated by whomever. Large group or a really small niche. Thanks again, Jason
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    Thanks for all of your great input, To by honest, I am working on a feature film currently. I have the full 90 page first draft of a script. I'd love to share it(I would like to proofread it a bit more, prior to you seeing) if your interested. Here's the log line... ...A mentally ill orthodox...
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    Hello Unknown Screenwriter, Sorry for the delayed response, I appreciate your kind words and helpful approaches on improving my script. I was told by user mlesemann, that I should send some of my better work to screenwriting contests. I'm wondering, for one, do you think this work is worthy of...
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    Hello Everyone

    Thank you so much. Well, i'd love some notes if that's possible. I think my work is getting decent but i'd love to know other's opinions. I'm working on a short right now and I have a first draft of a 90 page feature done. I can attach the short for a start if anyone would be interested...
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    Hello Everyone

    Hi mlesemann, I'm really looking for great feedback. I hope this site can provide me with great tools and suggestions on improvement in screenwriting. How would you suggest getting exposure for my work in the best way possible? Thanks, Jason
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    critique Critique on a short film script.

    I all, I'm working on a 15 page short drama film. It reads more as a play with dialogue between mostly two people. I'd love feedback on it. Also it hasn't been fully proofread just an FYI. Thanks, Jason
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    Hello Everyone

    Hi all, I'm a screenwriter/filmmaker looking to improve my writing abilities, and I hope I can find the resources on here to develop further. Thanks, Jason
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