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Ha ha, that was seriously never my intenion! Thanks so much for the kind words though.

I was messing around trying to make a movie about this ruined old school that's near my house. Ended up with this. Feedback welcome.

https://vimeo.com/238896333

Yeah, thanks, man and yes those are nicknames, but the full names are important later in the script. Thanks for the kind words, and for taking the time to look at it.

Hello, I would appreciate it if you could give me some feedback on the first pages of my screenplay. LOGLINE: 2 unlucky gangsters win the lottery, but their ticket is stolen by an unknowing stranger. Willing to do anything to get their money back, they trace him to a lonely motel. Getting...

I mean, I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but it does sound a bit crazy, if he means it. If he's just screwing around, you know, whatever. In all fairness, he did make it sound like Steven Spielberg is lucky this guy picked him to direct.

So, you decided you are going to write a script, and you decided THE Steven Spielberg, is going to direct it for you? You sound like a lunatic.

Hi. I want a spaceship to appear for the climax of my picture. The idea is that it's going to be visible through a window, resting on a small patch of sky, surrounded by tall buildings. Now, how should I go about this? The spaceship is not going to do much, it'll just be there, it doesn't have...

FIXED LINK Feedback Request - The Simpsons - Episode Hello. I wrote an episode of The Simpsons. I would appreciate it if anyone could read it and share your thoughts. It is my first time writing a screenplay, so there might be some formatting errors. It's a rather quick read (21 pages). I...