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The script is nowhere near finished...it's barely a first draft. I mainly want to make sure that it's funny. Let me know what you think, any feedback is appreciated. Warning: Very Raw.....and for Lamar think Kevin Hart and for Kevin think Anthony Anderson INT. GLORIA'S RESTAURANT - BAR -...

DELETE DELETE REPOSTED DELETE Dude you got just over a month as a free man. That's just enough time to.....you know.[/CENTER] Lamar makes a closed fist and motions it punching through his other hand simulating*sex. Kevin looks at him with a blank stare. Kevin What...what's that? I...

Wow! @FantasySciFi That was freaking amazing. I see exactly what you're saying. Thanks a Billion!

Thank you all. As you all stated, I'm am VERY new to this, actually my first attempt. I appreciate the candid feedback. Could someone expound on "on the nose dialogue?" Thanks a Billion!

Wow! Thanks alot for the feedback. Very helpful.

Logline: A seemingly upstanding husband enthralled in a nasty divorce is challenged when his secret indiscretions are brought to light by a mysterious hacker forcing him into public humility through a series of terroristic threats. COLD OPEN FADE IN: INT. PARK, RIDDELL AND RAKOWSKY LAW FIRM...

Hello fellow writers! I'm new to the site and pretty excited about sharing.