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    Feedback Request - "The Garden" - Short Screenplay

    Hey all, This is my second screenplay. Just two pages long. Would love to hear your thoughts. https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B2kOaVv3DFIgRldfckY5aVdxT2c Thank You!
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    Advice on my first screenplay..

    Thank you! Will work on the dialogues and character development. I knew for a fact that it would increase the duration by a good amount, that's why I had to kind of rush it.
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    Advice on my first screenplay..

    Yes, that really helped. Thanks. Will work on it. The tough part will be fitting it into a short film. That's why I had to heavily rely on dialogues to move the story along, as I kept that as the priority, because of the duration of the film.
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    Advice on my first screenplay..

    Thank you for the reply. Do you have any suggestions regarding the character development part? On how I can work on it.
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    Advice on my first screenplay..

    Hey, I just finished my first screenplay. It's for a short film that I intend to make, titled 'Forgiven'. Please read it and critique. :) https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B2kOaVv3DFIgVnJsMUVvaFBhV3M/view?usp=sharing Thanks.
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