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    Please critique my opening pages

    Hey guys, currently working on a comedy script, it's very early stages so please ignore any formatting, misplacements or character descriptions that are missing, i'll be sorting all that asap. Really want some opinions on the characters, flow and the dialogue on the opening 13 pages, what I have...
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    Please Critique My Comedy Script

    Hey guys, i'm new here so sorry if I'm not following appropriate customs. Was just hoping that somebody could give me some feedback on my comedy tv script? It's not a final polish so just really looking for any comments on like the first 5-10 pages, and specifically the dialogue. Extremely...
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