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    I'm 17 and just wrapped my first feature

    Hey man congrats on the film. Had a few questions. 1) Did you clear the ford truck? If not how is that going down with the distributors? 2) What was your setup with sound? Boom only? 3) Others have asked but how much of budget was allocated for actors? I am about to set out on a similar...
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Man I loved your notes. No problems there. I'm gonna get back to you asap. Digging it so far.
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Thanks. I was joking mainly. I feel your frustration, way too much tearing down. I understand critique, hell I asked for it and I appreciate it (as long as it is constructive). However I have been in contact with editor and even though his system is outdated, he seems to be quite pleasant in our...
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Let's all take a deep breath
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Thanks for all the positivity. Definitely working on it still, but I feel it's shaping into something. M
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Thank you so much. This will help a lot.
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    I will give anything a shot, send me a link or post it here if you will. Responded to your PM with email
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    As a filmmaker I totally understand. Crossing the line is hard. Even done right it can be a hard cut. I have taken a lot of these notes and applied them, but as I am a writer director (with a film currently in production), my writing is inherently more visual and directed. That being said, the...
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Thanks for the feedback. Will take a lot of your notes. Hastily written thus the blank lines will get on those. As for the others I will weigh them equally and see what I can do. Needs rewrites I get it but that's why I'm here not at a pitch meeting. I do get the feeling you are a tad of a...
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    For you Editor http://www.docdroid.net/t14l/end-of-the-sun-spec-2015.pdf.html
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Here's the next chunk https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzWvD_699FyRcjJVenZXTTlXSUU/view?usp=sharing M
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    opinions needed screenplay linked

    Editor the film is already financed this is a shooting draft.
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Anyone have a suggestion for another way to link that is more accessible? Never knew this was an issue as it has always worked for us. Also fantasySci-Fi, interested in the next 30 pages?
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    brand usage. generic?

    Anyone know how it works with using lables of generic products, such as "equate" or "great value"? Do these require clearance? I need a close up on someone grabbing a bottle of cough syrup off the shelf. Need it to look very professional. Thanks in advance
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Thank you. Got it fixed. I will post more pages as they come out. Good to get some fresh eyes on it.
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    My apologies. https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BzWvD_699FyRRlItVXFtcnNfRDA/edit?usp=docslist_api
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    anyone want to critique the first act of my scifi thriller?

    Will read in return.
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    opinions needed screenplay linked

    Here is a new draft i'm working on. I feel like it flows a lot better. https://docs.google.com/file/d/0BzWvD_699FyRZlM0ZjdpVEttbGc/edit?usp=docslist_api
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