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Wow. I've been really defensive. Apologies. The second draft is done (and in format, as I might reluctantly add). Should I just post it as a separate thread?

Please don't start asking for a just world. I'm going to start a second draft and post it in "PROPER" format when I get the chance. P.P.S. to be "FAIR" i did ask for feedback "if you all feel so inclined".

This boat existed?

I just don't wanna spend so much time on formatting that I spend less focus on my ideas, in the fear of them becoming opaque.

Screw that. Can't put meat on the bones if there are no bones. I honestly just hate script format. I'm slowly starting to loathe the word format too.

Oh, no monkey with a camcorder is touching my script. I am judge, jury, and executioner of this film. Actors I understand. But I'm not planning on selling this crp; I'm looking to maybe get a couple friends together and film it with them. I doubt they've ever seen a screenplay before, and if...

I honestly couldn't care less about formatting. Again, I didn't come here to get ridiculed on my syntax. Could we please focus on content.

I want to put through this guy's environment. It's completely uncivilized. At the same time, I think that a good, thoughtful running dialogue would set up a strong bond between the guy and delores, as she is to be a recurring character. What's there is just skeleton.

This is great. The score is in line, framing is on point, and I love how passive the cinematography is. Also love the jump cuts.

LOL "Raymond". Actually this is great, thank you. This is what I'm looking for. My notes: overall would like the dialogue to be longer (not you edit, but the desire on my actual script); some great phrases, although some seem a bit superficial and not completely what I would use; I would like to...

Give !@#$ about formatting if it entertains?

That's supposed to be satirical cuz gammar is arbitrary [lawl]. And that's what I was afraid of. I know it's terrible, I'm looking for HALP. The scene's supposed to establish a connection between delores and the guy and also solve a problem for the guy. What I'm looking for is ways you people...

This was done in notepad. As for formatting, I kinda just started writing. I've read scripts before, but I've never studied the formula of formatting. I just felt if I get mechanical about it, the writing will seem the same, and not as plot adherent (that may not be the word I'm looking for)...

I am writing a screenplay and have come to my first scene that's mostly dependent on dialogue. This is not my first time writing dialogue, but my first doing it for a visual interpretation. I know I need to take into account being realistic and also not being too shallow. This is the first draft...

Ok, so now BM pocket compared to T5i?

Isn't BM anywhere from 2k-3k? Also, just did some looking around and got me wondering: what's the actual difference between 5i and 4i (if there is one)?

Thank you everyone for your feedback! In reply, HD would be preferable. I have no problem putting the money down for a T5i if XL1 only shoots standard def (this being said, I'm not willing or in the position to splurge on a blackmagic). Also I'd lean personally to the T5i more for the sake of...

AYYY. Putting everything in the works right now for a short film. Was hoping to get some advice on what route I should go as far as a camera. I had talked with a specialist before and he told me to go with the t5i if I wanted to film with a DSLR. The only other thing that has caught my eye is...

ONLY GOD FORGIVES - decent 8/10