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Wow that was creepy as heck.

Great analogy.

Wow this is creepy. Hopefully she's okay.

From the fight taking place, to the appearance of Ford next to Luca, the first thing that popped into my head was that Luca was mentally unstable and had a hallucination after Ford threw away the walkie - not that Ford wasn't real. I guess I'm one of the other 50% ?

Unfortunately I did not pick up on the dissociative identity disorder experienced by Luca. Wouldn't having Ford in the scenes next to Luca make it more difficult to determine/guess he's not real?

I'm intrigued to see what happens.

It was a good trailer. I would like to see the rest.

I'll preface this by saying I hate giving feedback that doesn't really help the other person, with that said, I didn't make it past the 3min mark. Just couldn't. Glad you guys won a bunch of awards ;)

At the 1:38 minute mark the dead body moves his left pinky finger. I noticed it immediately and was expecting the person to either be faking his death to attack the unsuspecting intruder or turn into a zombie. Neither happened so I was surprised by it, considering it was later shown as a...

This was a woman taking things into her own hands in regards to a serial killer and human trafficking. Great series.

Reminds me of Alexandra Sokoloff's "Moon Series".

Maybe Dale's sister wasn't living in town but possibly visiting someone there, and that's when she went missing?

This sounds like a Jack Reacher story. I'm a sucker for the loner, play by the rules/honesty badass that is placed in a situation he doesn't even want to be but comes out the other side taking matters into his own hands. I would love it if Dale was driving at duck/night and he sees the young...

This was really well done. Good job and best of luck in the future.

Anyone else?

Collateral damage ;)

Thanks for the reply. All feedback is highly appreciated.

I hate to be negative but I got to the 10th page and stopped reading. The conversations don't seem real and feel forced. The fact that Jack is 27yo, only has 43 followers online but hasn't figured out that he's not an online superstar is insanely far fetched. The dynamic at the office is...

Hello everyone ☺️ I'm working on a new idea and have finished (Are they ever finished?) the opening scene. I'm currently outlining the full movie but wanted to see what the forum thought of what I have so far. Any and all feedback is highly appreciated. Thanks for the help...

I like this a lot. I can't help on the script writing but I do like the story itself. The futuristic mixed in with the old Western makes it interesting. Good work ;)