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Hello everyone at Indietalk.com, I'm finally getting the motivation to crowdfund and produce a screenplay of mine known simply and provocatively as: Fraulein Fox and the Fashion Nazis Truly inspired by the tradition of numerous Mel Brooks films: Young Frankenstein, To Be or Not to Be, The...

No, no... brutally frank is good The half hour is for the first scene of the new short only... the vast majority is filmed at an apartment... Even still you are right I should probably get at least an hour. Thank you...

Actually an interesting point about the "Shots ya (I) got"... I went kinda guerrilla filmmaker in that store... the owner was barely tolerating her screaming and yelling in there. I was kinda rushed but def by my own lack of foresight... I'm planning on paying off the store owner for the store...

Thank you, That's actually something I need to work on. I will try to get better for next time but in the words of Master Yoda... "Do or do not. There is no try." No, but seriously... good feedback. I'll keep it in mind for my upcoming film, "Angel Maniac"...

Well, I'm not claiming to be any master yet so be perfectly honest. I appreciate all feedback and I realize that I very well could get torn apart. Still, it's worth it to view I think. It's short enough that if you don't like it you can still reach the end. Without further ado...

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A) I may have made an error in the character cues and I will check that but it is intended to be that John wins the lottery ticket and that is how he has the money to get the prostitute. Perhaps a few lines of connecting would be a good idea just to make sure that point is solid. As for the...

Yes Thank you both for the formatting problems... I'm not exactly a master of them yet. I will correct them presently... but is there anyone that might be able to critique the "literary" value of the story?

Hello IndieTalk comrades, I have recently written a short screenplay named "Angel Maniac" and I am looking for feedback on it. I would particularly appreciate anything that you have to say about the clarity and flow of the script. I am especially interested in learning from your comments. I...