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  1. jsmithson

    critique "We Real Cool" 2 Page Short Script - feedback requested

    Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VrdSW41uI_-3URLIz9CChwz9EgQ9cDfE5zKPFfXLYos/edit?usp=sharing This is a short script I'd like to shoot some day. It's about the collision of two completely different lives. Any feedback or critique would be much appreciated. Thanks! 🙂
  2. jsmithson

    critique Motormouth, a short script I’d appreciate critique on

    Don’t mind this, poorly formatted and written, may reupload at a later date!
  3. jsmithson

    critique Friendly Spirits, a short 2 page script – any critique appreciated

    I originally wrote this story in response to a writing prompt, and adapted it for screen. I apologize for the wonky formatting, I couldn’t get Celtx to email the pdf to me. Thanks for looking! 🙂 https://docs.google.com/document/d/11UFgYlGUk6k56b-kQ9fjddvhqNjOR2VVcdRhAX9mUVo/edit
  4. jsmithson

    critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested

    This is a very short script for a film I will be shooting some time early next year. Page length: 4 pages Synopsis: James and his girlfriend Natasmai have a funny relationship. She can understand him, but James doesn’t know her language. When he finds out what’s on her mind, his world is...
  5. jsmithson

    Hello folks!

    Hi there, I'm a copywriter living in Baltimore. I've been writing fiction for 18 years, and just started shooting films again. Looking forward to contributing to the indie talk fraternity. All the best, –J.R.
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