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    character How to write a scene where two characters are hiding from another? How to write clear and concise action lines?

    Thank you so much for all the feedback
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    character How to write a scene where two characters are hiding from another? How to write clear and concise action lines?

    Thank you all for the feedback so far
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    character How to write a scene where two characters are hiding from another? How to write clear and concise action lines?

    How would I explain the fact that there is two elevators? And that an elevator is opening?
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    character How to write a scene where two characters are hiding from another? How to write clear and concise action lines?

    Would you recommend using chatgpt for descriptions? How did you get this result?
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    character How to write a scene where two characters are hiding from another? How to write clear and concise action lines?

    How would I do this? What are secondary scene headings?
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    character How to write a scene where two characters are hiding from another? How to write clear and concise action lines?

    Trying to figure out how to write a scene where two characters are hiding behind a couch, whilst two other characters are being interrogated. Would really appreciate feedback as I'm nearing the end of Act 1 (I'm 22 pages deep on my first draft) and want to ensure I am writing better going...
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    character Thoughts on my Sci Fi Pilot? How can I make the audience care about characters in the first few pages?

    Hi all, I am looking for feedback on the first 14 pages of my sci fi pilot. Mainly, I am curious to know: Have I got an interesting story thus far in your opinion? Do I introduce the world or have I overdone it? Have I successfully teased the theme thus far? Link to script...
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    Hi Scrawlx1012 here

    Hi , thank you for welcoming me.
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    critique Mercury (Animated Pilot - 25 Pages) (Would love feedback - first attempt at trying to really write this year)

    Would love to have feedback on this pilot. Logline: A young bully is dragged into a global conflict where earth battles against an otherworldly force after a series of asteroids fall on every continent in the world. Link to script...
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    Hi Scrawlx1012 here

    I'm an aspiring writer from London. I like writing drama and love the sci fi/superhero genre.
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