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Again, the link works fine but I went in made another using dropbox. Here is another link https://www.dropbox.com/s/pkubfnpemprrb9w/Script%20bully%20%2816%29.pdf?dl=0 Also, you can scan the url for viruses, it's clean. Here is a site you can use to scan it. https://www.virustotal.com/ or...

You must of download something else bro, its google drive. Works perfectly fine for me and a friend i sent it to. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8UX3D6AhyWfSThneDBOLUhiQm8/view?usp=sharing

Open perfectly fine for me not sure what you're experiencing.

I should've probably mentioned this is a short film, that I'm writing for a friend. And yes it will be your everyday cliche. :( Here is a bit more I wrote tonight, I didn't proofread it all yet, so there will most likely be a lot of errors...

How about "Cake Solved" or Cake Closed. Maybe even "Private I-cing".

Thanks! Ill go back and make the fixes.

Did you see anything I could, approve on further?

I'll consider that if my brain decides, it can no longer learn. Ok, here is the re-write let me know what I'm still lacking at, thanks. https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8UX3D6AhyWfSThneDBOLUhiQm8/view?usp=sharing

Can someone tell me if I'm on the right track, please! I have been learning about punctuation for a couple days now and I think I had a moment of clarity. Please tell me if this is correct thanks. A swarm of teens huddles together in a circle, They clamor*for blood. In the center of the...

California education system sucks! I'm glad you're able to function with your disability. For me it's complicated. I can only focus for like 3 minutes before I zone out lol Didn't mean to make excuses It's just hard for me to learn when I have no idea what to look for. btw no need give me...

Sadly yes :( But I have an excuse lol I have a learning disability. It has kept me back for years, well that and a failed education system...

I agree with you 100 percent. I don't care for scripts like this, I'm only writing it as a favor for a friend.

I'm trying to learn. I made some fixes probably made more mistakes :(

If you have a chance mad hatter can you point out what I did wrong so i can learn how to fix it?

sorry about that, as you can see i'm not very smart lol ill fix it tonight and repost the link

take a look if you can, let me know if its sounds to corny thanks. UPDATE https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8UX3D6AhyWfbGZpSTJsUld0ZEU/view?usp=sharing

i'm sure the footage is no better but that was an iphone photo we actually shot it with the ursa mini.

I remade a scene recently from reservoir dogs, it was only two minutes but it was worth it. I ran in to a few problems like finding the right car. long story short i had to sneak in to a junk yard and use a green screen lol the car we used had shredded upholstery i lined it with plastic and...

Thank you for taking the time to read the first 5 pages of my script, this site has proven to be very helpful in learning the proper way to write one out. It will take me some time to fully understand every bit of advice . I'm not the smartest person lol I spent most of my schooling in special...

dam good short! Only thing that i disliked was the bad acting from the guy sitting with the girl.