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  1. J

    archived-videos SHORT: Chess 4 Life

    I love chess and I hope the features is more engaging than the trailer. The trailer felt bland and didnt grab my attention. Heres the biggest thing, what is stopping the kid from walking out of the room?
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    archived-videos Mock 80's Mexican Action Short Film! Please watch!

    You have got to start a "kickstart" for the full feature. I would def donate some dinero.
  3. J

    archived-videos Mock 80's Mexican Action Short Film! Please watch!

    Dude that was awesome!!! Every possible 80's cliche was present and the over the top acting and costumes were incredible. I'm laughing so fucking hard right now...
  4. J

    Production Diary: The Kohlman Files

    Wow this looks like a really cool project. Good luck with the funding. Keep the updates coming.
  5. J

    archived-videos BANG BANG Trailer

    ^^^ he is correct. As a trailer it doesnt peak my interest, therefore I will probably not bother to keep an eye out for it. You have got to pull the audience in with the trailer, and even though the synopsis says the 3 friends are headed in different directions, besides the mention of wanting...
  6. J

    archived-videos Snow Will Rise

    I liked it but you had to give the snowman a reason. As you have it, there is no purpose for the snowman to want to kill. I know it sounds dumb, considering the fact that we are talking about a snowman, but even the impossible has to make sense in its simplest form. Also the noises(door...
  7. J

    archived-videos Anamnesis

    Woot woot I was correct!!! What do I win? Lol Alex I have passed that link to all of my closest friends and linked on my FB page, you guys did a great job. About how long would you say it took, from beginning to end, to make the film? And where did you find the actors?
  8. J

    Another idea stored in my head...

    I'm using my cell with no access to a computer right now, just wanted to say tnx for liking my simple idea and for giving me many other options to go with. I'll reply with more details tonite. JoshL -- "also be pretty creepy if he sees the past, but still sees himself in the mirror, with the...
  9. J

    archived-videos Anamnesis

    I have one question regarding the title, are you referring to the Christianity form or Platos' Meno's one? I would imagine it is Platos' given the fact the guy is searching for something he doesnt know he has lost, but I can't say for sure...
  10. J

    Johnson and McFly

    I will suggest both ;)
  11. J

    action My 100% Action Scene

    Okay gotcha. If the twist can justify the scene, then yeah it is a cool scene. Sorry if I was harsh, not my intention ;)
  12. J

    action My 100% Action Scene

    Okay I read the scene twice and I'm not sure you can pull it off unless SWAT members happened to have attended the "Imperial Stormtrooper Marksmanship Academy". There is absolutely no way that 3 armed SWAT members, at close range, can not kill this guy within 2 seconds of him shooting the guy...
  13. J

    action My 100% Action Scene

    I stopped reading here -- "That might sound kinda cheesey, but I think when it's done it will be at least decent." Why would you want your work to be "at least decent" and not "phoking awesome"? It seems like you are already putting your film down, before you have recorded a single second of...
  14. J

    Another idea stored in my head...

    You have no idea how my wife hates the fact that I have seen that scene in my head countless times over the past 4-5 years. Yepp she think it is kinda weird and creepy but I guess it is just the way my mind works. I have about 6 other ideas that I'm absolutely positive could be great features...
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    Another idea stored in my head...

    Thank you guys for the positive replies. Fantasy -- I'm literally finishing a short about a guy who has access to future information, just a different way of "delivery". Plus the short I'm finishing deals with a relationship and how knowing the future can change the present. So even though is...
  16. J

    movies What's the last film you watched? And rate it!

    "Even the Rain" -- Great flick imho. I'm a big fan of Gael Garcia Bernal and this is one of his best, along with "The Science of Sleep".
  17. J

    Another idea stored in my head...

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  18. J

    Johnson and McFly

    Change the name, it only draws attention away from the character. It will be like calling him PeeWee... Just my 2cents.
  19. J

    found footage horror/slasher

    I'm a sucker for found footage and slasher films, so I'm excited to see what this turn out to be... As for ideas, what did you come up with? Whats the final outline? I would turn the tables around on the stalkers and make the family(Kids and Dad) some crazy armageddon-apocalypse-fearing guys...
  20. J

    archived-videos Something different :)

    Funny story and acting. As Cracker said, I think you could had sped up the sequence but it was still a cool short ;)
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