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  1. J

    archived-videos Zombie short called "Exodus" im working on

    It looks good man. I'll keep an eye out for it. Who did the makeup?
  2. J

    archived-videos Dolls for Strangers - a short film

    Looks interesting... Good luck with the festivals!
  3. J

    archived-videos USC/NYU film application

    Not trying to be an a-hole here but why would you not apply more time and effort into something that could be life changing? I do hope you learn from it and move in a positive direction, it just seems baffling... Again, best of luck!
  4. J

    archived-videos The Vampire Hunter

    I saw it and I thought it was pretty good. I would have just paid closer attention to the smaller details. Besides that, it was really good.
  5. J

    archived-videos The Vampire Hunter

    The guy wearing a newer style watch on his left wrist...
  6. J

    archived-videos Particle Gun

    I'm on a ramen-noodles budget, so my audio setup is a cheaper audio technica mic and a Sony digital voice recorder. The setup is decent and when compared to yours, it is less "noisy". Can you adjust the audio levels in your camera's input? Maybe messing around with those will help. Do you have a...
  7. J

    archived-videos The Vampire Hunter

    What time period were you trying to portray and based on that answer, did you not care to have proper costumes?
  8. J

    archived-videos "Extras Needed" Filmmaking Hell

    I can't watch the trailer on my phone, but I would love to check out the full doc. I'm an avid fan of documentaries and just from the small amount of information you have provided, it seems like a really good film. Joey
  9. J

    archived-videos USC/NYU film application

    I stopped watching at 1:53 when the two guys started arguing about who was the alpha male... Up to that point I had already gotten annoyed at the missing person flyer having the black silhouette, the fact the girl didn't seem to have any blue tape with her, the fact the victims weren't afraid...
  10. J

    archived-videos Particle Gun

    The effects were really good man, keep them coming. As far as audio, what are you recording into? It just sounds "too ambient", if that makes any sense. Did you do any color corrections? The look just has a "home video look" to it, and I don't think you were going for that. As I had said...
  11. J

    archived-videos "Asleep" Horror Short

    ^^^ What he said x2 ;)
  12. J

    archived-videos Absolute Envisage

    Ahh I don't know man, when you say I need patience to watch your movie, that to me is not a good sign. I do have to say that you did good with the specia effects, keep working on them and just work harder ont he storytelling part of it.
  13. J

    archived-videos Absolute Envisage

    I didn't make it beyond the scene where the kid picks up the car... And I had been generous since I wanted to stop at 17seconds when I couldn't read the text on the screen, since it was black and lost in the kids' black jacket. For what I saw, at your age, you did good. Now you gotta work on...
  14. J

    cinematography MP4 vs AVCHD -- 1080 vs 720...

    Oh btw, I'm using Sony Vegas Movie Studio HD on a i5 processor Gateway laptop. In case it matters.
  15. J

    cinematography MP4 vs AVCHD -- 1080 vs 720...

    Hello everyone, I just finished my short script and I have sent it out to my friends for feedback. Now I'm thinking about the actual filming stage. The short film will be a "reality home video" style with 3 friends dealing with a difficul situation. It will be shot about 25% outside and the...
  16. J

    Rewrite rewrite and rewrite some more

    I have rewritten so many short stories and poems that at the end, they are but a snippet of what the original ideas were. Only problem is that by the last version, I sometimes forget what the original one was about because I hardly ever store the original separately, I always just change on top...
  17. J

    archived-videos SHORT: Chess 4 Life

    You have got 30seconds to a minute and a half to grab the viewer and not let go. For that viewer to text or call their friends and pass the info or for the viewer to share the link. If you don't do your job right with the trailer, nobody will care... Don't get me wrong, I have never edited a...
  18. J

    archived-videos A 20 second short film

    I took it as a flashback to the action that had already happened. Which I'm sure it is ;)
  19. J

    archived-videos SHORT: Chess 4 Life

    So you knew the trailer didn't provide the audience the best info possible and you still went with it? That doesn't really make sense. Probably the reason why nobody else but me has posted anything...
  20. J

    archived-videos A 20 second short film

    I thought it was funny but it was only 20seconds because you sped up the film. Wouldn't that be cheating?
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