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  1. J

    First Person POV

    I don't really care for first person pov but on a bigger note I think the idea/story seems kinda high-schoolish... Good luck nonetheless with the project!
  2. J

    archived-videos Critique wanted on 2 minute Thriller/Horror Film!!

    Saw the short and enjoyed it. Nice job overall. I liked th actors and dark feel of it. I know that the time limit puts a great restraint in your options but there are a couple of things I would have done differently. Before I continue, I'm only a regular member with a passion for films. I have...
  3. J

    archived-videos Battle Hero Absolute (Japanese Tokusatsu Inspired Series)

    I was an absolute fanatic of the power rangers and before that all the Japanese cartoons from the late 80's, so as you would have guessed I was super excited to read your description of the project. Unfortunately within one minute of watching the first episode I stopped the video. Reason why...
  4. J

    archived-videos POST-APOCALYPSE- INDEPENDENT

    Are you trying to go for "cheekish and funny"? Because that's what the preproduction vids are coming off as. I'll be honest, if the actual film has the same qualities as the preproduction vids, I will probably skip over it. Just my two worthless cents of an opinion. Good luck and have fun...
  5. J

    archived-videos Campus MovieFest Submission: Hidden. 2 x Award Winning!

    The cinematography looks great but the writing, as noted above, is definitely corny. Also the need to portray a "drug deal" type of transaction is overdone. You should had tried to come up with a different way of showing that... Also the guys acting was subpar imho. Just trying to offer some...
  6. J

    archived-videos Ascent (descent) [nuclear war movie]

    That was really good. How old is it?
  7. J

    archived-videos New short film- The One Inside

    I liked the short, it was simple but entertaining. As posted above, the ending was kind of "bland" but overall it was good.
  8. J

    archived-videos On The Ropes Boxing Documentary Film

    Video not loading on my iPad.
  9. J

    archived-videos Drama/Thriller - China White

    Not my type of film but you had some good shots in it. I only made it about 7minutes into it tho...
  10. J

    archived-videos My 1st feature film - Trailer

    Looks good. When will it be released?
  11. J

    archived-videos 'Tightening Our Belts' - A Short HORROR Film

    As others mentioned, great work man. Besides the audio not having been blended I thought you did great. Was I the only who thought that the woman looked like a little girl while running after him? I don't know why but I thought it was the couple's daughter or something. Like the height...
  12. J

    archived-videos My First Fight Scene !!

    video has been removed... boooh i wanted to see it.
  13. J

    archived-videos "Refuge" Trailer - Please watch!

    I like the look of it and it seems like it will be a cool flick. Two things I didn't like, the guys scar looks incredibly fake. Now if it is a real one, then idk what to say about it, but if it's fake, like I think it is, t should had been a bit smaller. Also the two guys in the back of the...
  14. J

    archived-videos Okay, my second ever short film is done.

    I thought it was funny - clean and simple short. Couple of things I would had like to see done; as mentioned above, you could had shot the opening conversation better. Also the guy didn't sound/seem ill, you need to portray that better. One last thing, instead of taking the easy way out and...
  15. J

    archived-videos The Recall | Short Film | 2012

    Trailer looks good - I would watch it. Only things I didn't like were the red color of the lights in the room and the tossing and turning at the beginning. The lights are a bit too much imo. And the tossing around seemed waaay overdone. Other than that it seemed good. Keep us updated.
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    archived-videos I Have A Bad Feeling About This - feature trailer

    Good promo from BBC. Looks like a fun project. I'll be donating for sure but would rather just papal you as opposed to having to sign with another site, can I do that?
  17. J

    archived-videos Disillusion-Short Film

    I tried watching but the audio/video sync was really off and I couldn't get past the first 30seconds. I'll try to see if I can watch it in a different computer...
  18. J

    archived-videos Duo Tone - A Short Sci-Fi Thriller

    I enjoyed it but the zooming issues did get distracting. The part when we learn the truth of the story was a bit underdeveloped - meaning I didn't quite get the reasoning behind it. Other than that and the obvious sound issues, I think it was quite good. I did like some of your shot selection...
  19. J

    archived-videos Call of Babylon (Feature Film) - Teaser Trailer

    Spot on! The music was way too intense for the "good" portion of the trailer. The moment the first big "noise/snare/clap" I was expecting a surprise scene, but instead the girl just walked outside with an umbrella -- not the type of "surprise" I was looking for. Also there was no story to the...
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