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What kind of camera did you use? I'm asking cause the picture was a bit fuzzy. Also the left side output was louder for some reason, was it just me? I'll be honest, I stopped watching halfway through. Reason why is because it felt like it was going nowhere. I'm not trying to be an as$ but it...

It was kinda funny. I did like the music. Do you guys have anything more?

All I can say is INCREDIBLE!!! The best short film I have seen -- ever. Everything about it was great. I only hope anything I ever do is a quarter as good as this one...

As wheat said -- the sound was really loud and it definitely annoyed me since I was using headphones whole seeing the film. I did like it but man were those loud... I checked out your other vids, you have a really good talent. Keep it up!

I liked the film a lot. It seems like a story I could had come up with -- meaning I'm always told I have some weird ideas and this one fits right in with the short script I'm writing ;) Great job!!! One thing I didn't like was the complete control of the camera. What I mean is that the camera...

Funny thing is I also made some camera equipment from random stuff I had around my job. I'll post pics soon. As for your images, you need to upload them to a site, wether it be Facebook, Photobucket, Flickr etc. You won't be able to upload them to this site from your computer, so find a hosting...

I wasnt able to see the vid since I'm on a mobile but the idea sounds really interesting. Definitely gonna keep an eye on it.

Do you have any of your works for us to see? I like the short. I really liked the interaction between the two actors; they did a really good job. I'm not sure what the ending was supoosed to represent and the lighting was too dark and unflattering. But as mentioned above, I'm pretty sure you...

I think when it comes to the death/murder of a character in a movie/book the audience absolutely has to be involved in the process. I mean I as the viewer/reader, have got to have a point of view about the whole situation. Does it make sense to you?

The stories are there you just gotta find them. For example, I went to a local shopping center and saw a father getting in an elevator while the son took the stairs - they were trying to see who got to the bottom first. As I walked away I thought it would be cool if when the father got out, the...

Shit that was easy ;) If you liked that, I can actually take a bit more time on it and make it better. Again that was a "on the spot" idea. I can tweak it for you if you are really going to film it.

remove the "http" copy off the address.

Another thing, when the guy is writting on the notebook at the end of the day, you can clearly see the blurred out clock at the end of the desk - next time, don't make it so obvious. Maybe place the camera on the left side of the hand, at an angle, and as the guy is writing towards the right...

As Gary mentioned your camera work looks really good. Any info on when the full version will be available?

Your writing is good, very well done. So the bad guy gets the Steve Austin treatment? And then what happens? Why should I sympathise with a thief and be excited he got robotic arms? If you want the audience to be attached to the character, you have to give some admirable qualities.

You went for the easiest possible story. You need to think beyond the simplest form and actually come up with something that the audience will be happy to have seen... Here's a quick example, it took me less than 3minutes to come up with it: Female student being stalked by someone after a late...

One small piece of advice, don't ever put something online for others to see/critique when it is not fully finished - unless it is an invite only site or password protected. Or make certain that you explain what the reasoning is for posting it, kind of like this one where you only needed your...

I really liked the looks and camera work. But overall the teaser doesn't intrigue me enough to add the link to my favorites in order to keep track of it. I would consider adding more to the trailer. I would lower the volume of the voice and maybe even try a differenf person with a more...

You don't think I get it and I don't think you do, and we will go back and forth 'till the end of days. I think that's my queue to stop posting on the thread. It was fun while it lasted, thanks for the laughs everyone.