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Good suggestions man. I decided to add speaking characters into the story. Basically the scenes with the main deaf character would be silent.

I will. Thanks

This is just a tiny spark of an idea which I posted. This is the screenplay section and my only focus is actually completing a script.

I suppose I'm asking the question simply based on my idea and the pairing of such a stylistic form of silent film. My basic plot is about a Space Transit Air Marshall named Kelvin. The woman he loves is kidnapped and he is forced to smuggle illegal material across the galaxy for an Alien...

Mad respect for having the balls to take a risk and create your own short film. Kudos!

I hate to say this but I didn't like it.

I'm glad the name does have a meaning. I don't have a production company but if I was so lucky to then it would be called "Cliff Castle Studios."

What is the screenplay about?

Just need some advice. Would it be a good idea to make my first feature a silent film?

What is the significance of "Merely Stardust?"

Highly entertaining! I enjoyed watching it and the ending was certainly satisfying. If you'd like my tiny criticisms just let me know.

I liked it. Very simple, to the point, and the perfect amount of humor. Good job on this.

The best way we learn anything in life is through failure. You failed today but you learned a valuable lesson: Hire the right people.

I would suggest only that the character of the son does not say "dad" or "father" in the dialog. Other than that your screenplay is a masterpiece. It's a good story and I enjoyed reading it.

I really enjoyed these music videos. They were both made every well.

I think I might try it out especially since I have never attempted a screenplay longer than 15 pages.

My bad. Just the first film that came to mind.

This is an article I found which was very helpful for me in outlining an idea I had for a feature screenplay. I believe deeply in story and nobody does story better than the guys at Pixar. Enjoy. http://storyfanatic.com/articles/story-structure/writing-complete-stories

There is a movie starring Hayden Christiansen titled "Awake" Synopsis: The story focuses on a man who suffers "anesthetic awareness" and finds himself awake and aware, but paralyzed, during heart surgery. His mother must wrestle with her own demons as a drama unfolds around them, while trying...

Thanks for the encouraging words. Now the hard part is getting a team together to produce it.