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No, unless it stops you from completing your daily tasks, or affects your health negatively, or affects your social life negatively. Also by posting here I'm assuming that you are fully aware of your situation, and are in no way denying it so no...you're just bored.

Maybe it was the way it was stated. Are you willing to accept my apology? No, not really. Being tolerant doesn't mean the tolerated is a bad person. It means you're able to cooperate, or allow a difference in opinion to exist. In other words a hipster can be tolerant of you, and you of the...

You have to start somewhere, just relax. And I think it was entertaining to watch. Usually in shorts I stop watching them halfway if there bad, this one managed to keep me entertained thought, so I think it was pretty good. Also I don't think he's looking for a critique. EDIT: Well, not an in...

We tend to project and evaluate others based on our beliefs. It may seem fake and "annoying" to you but only because your beliefs differ. How is it any different from you saying you like chocolate cake, and me saying I hate chocolate cake, and you end calling me a liar, or fake? That was more...

I was merely stating that not everyone conforms. Other than that I agree with you. Aside from that, I find it ironic that you're trying to convince me by saying it's a well accepted model for human behavior. That is true, and what Philis is talking about isn't what makes a video go viral...

What's wrong with being a hipster when you sincerely like the way you dress, and the music you listen too? You shouldn't sit on your throne and judge others.

I don't think they need to re-write anything. By this video it seems he believes AI will evolve to become conscious of the world around it. This is usually what happens in films that involve AI.

haha, I like the picture. And yeah, but does the dialogue seem believable? Can you imagine two people talking?

First draft, no edits, or formatting, but what do you think about the draft? It's incomplete, and it's probably not going to be finished. I haven't placed it into a structure or created one for this, I just wrote it. I'm looking for a critique on the dialogue. EDIT: I decided to finish it. It's...

Genetically women should be attracted to alpha males, whether it's in the younger stages of life when it's physical traits, or maybe a professional career. They want the alpha to give them children. Maybe not for a long term relationship but to secure their child a future mate, and to insure...

It depends on the person. Some people conform more easily, and some don't. Your theory doesn't make much sense if everyone conformed, because then nobody would watch videos because the video needs to be pre-approved right? But by who? The conformist? Impossible because they need pre-approval to...

I think that's an understatement, it needs a whole story, jk I know you're trying to be more supportive. Anyways, he asked us what we think of his idea, (your complaint is about a lack of story, and I agree) but we're being told to asses his idea not his story. But it's not easy to critique...

I think there's a general definition for beauty, good genetics.

Remember, when stories are put in there simplest forms they sometimes sound uninteresting. And it's also possible that your interpretation of his "idea" isn't as interesting as his own? It's pointless to ask questions about the story in this stage of development, although this thread is...

To be honest when everyone's good looking in a film it seems weird, and fake to me. I hate it, it really bothers me, it just seems too fake for me.

I'll write one then, I need to practice my writing anyway. I doubt it's what your looking for but I'll have it made in a few days. Tell me what you think, Log line: After their fathers store was robbed his children vow to catch the men responsible. EDIT: I imagine it being a pretty well...

I was finishing up a script like I said earlier but it's the opposite of what you're looking for and I doubt I can write something without breaking 1 or 2 of your rules, so I withdraw. Probably not a necessary post but w/e, +1 post count.

My god.

or strippers. Or maybe stripper zombies?

I'm finishing up a script, my first script. And what are your tastes? And when do you need it by?