Thank you so far for the deep dive into the audio part, I understand your suggestions and your different view
to my decisions which are about style, a contrapointed web of score and very dry voice to support the psycho talk of the actress.
This should not be a discussion, if my use of the word...
It is at least for me, :-) . if you consider, that I did an original score and multiple tracks of chinese curses, foleys and sampled broken dishes and glass for the end scene.
@ape, Thank you for the helpful comments. Extensive was related to exceed the 24 man hours time budget. Continuous score and nearly dry intimate voice where a design decision. Will keep your suggestions in mind for the next script.
Thank you for watching and your comment, yes, there are a few glitches, also visual ones.
But Im quite happy with the ratio of result/invested time.
Our goal is to streamline the process to get better results in limited time.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QyaGHHwZxkk
This is the first film of our Monologue-Plus series.
These movies are based on a monologue featuring a single actor/actress.
This turns out as a nice win-win, because the talent gets first class material
for the reel and we have the chance to do...
Thank you, this is a procedural model, which means the geometry can be changed in minutes to something different.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fHFuym5GJoA
Sorry, but I wouldnt expect this unskilled discussion in a film forum. Lucys look is done by intention and it was a great decision to make her NOT look perfect like a model.
Congrats, this film worked for me, especially regarding cinematography, editing. Could have more speed in the action scenes. For your next film try experienced actors. With this film on your demo reel, Im sure you will find
actors willing to work for free/food.
Great to hear, please let us see at least SOME lines you wrote, some dialogue, what the scene is about, etc. Why do you keep this secret?
We know, it would be just a draft, any script gets multiple revisions.
What about publishing an outline of the script. The scenes you are planning and the progress of writing for each scene. As others said, the script part is the most critical, not only film-wise, but also to get collaborators on board.
Same for me, my lights are named Toolbox (2x36), I just added the wire and changed to Osram tubes.
Then I placed that array on a rack with wheels. You might just want to fix the lights on a wooden panel or something like that.
They are very bright, its a good idea to give each unit an...
Exactly, if you want to build up a system for remote collaboration, me and other members would be interested to see, how this gonna work. Filming at location is a small part of filmmaking, so I think there might be a way to do all the other work from remote.