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Hell, no! I'm studying in a screenwriting class, and brought this story to the class. It was called sexist. The teacher gave me this exercise. He offered me to try to implement this story in a "world where women dominate". I'm just looking for something to film, and I thought that if I write...

I meant the point of how the protagonist solves the problem, without having to choose from what he has been given. This is what I've taken from what you wrote. :) The exercise was to implement the original story in a world, where women dominate. And of course, I can alter the original story if...

I decided to take the idea NickClapper has offered, that the protagonist writes a script about his experience, where he had to sleep with the producer, and the producer takes his first script if the writer destroys the second one. I just reverse it this way, that the producer is female, if the...

To make him gay that has to have sex with a women? Well, then I don't really need to make a world where female dominate. Still, I'll try to implement it. But a question, is having sex with a woman so horrible for a gay? Many gays are not against having sex with women. Bisexuals. He must be a...

I'm going to write the synopsis here, within a day or two.

Thanks for the honesty :)

Yes, this is the direction I've thought about, but won't it remind a reversed version of 50 shades of gray? :lol:

You mean to take your example where woman is a young screenwriter, and the producer is a man, and switch places where the producer is a woman and the man is the writer. This is about "a man succeeding in a world dominated by woman". Assuming it's something comic - I love the idea! Is it bad if I...

OK thanks. Then do you think the woman should be... not very pretty? Or , on the contrary, should I make her a hot "business lady"? How would you see it working? And what do you think about making the entire story happen in a world where woman dominate over men? I mean, woman are those who...

What I meant to show is that the stake is not going to army prison, but the justice. I believe nobody would like to be jailed for something he didn't do, not even for 1 day. A matter of principle. So the protagonist fights not for not going to jail, but for restoring justice.

I had an idea for a comedy short script. A desperate screenwriter has to have sex with an ugly and fat female producer to have her buy his screenplay. It was about Shay, "wanna-be-screenwriter" who can't sell a single screenplay, until one day gets an offer - have sex with the producer to...

Your question is - why should he be charged with a crime, before the Master Sergeant checks that a lock is missing from his storage? Am I correct? Assuming it is indeed the question, then yes, blaming someone without checking the facts is a common thing, especially when it comes to a fresh...

I have an idea for a short film, something easier to shoot than my previous idea. It occurs in a daily routine in a military base. It is about a soldier fighting for justice after being falsely judged for a theft. Based on my personal experience A badly disciplined soldier struggles to prove...

Hey, I wrote another draft and changed the title to "Price of Freedom", because "Courier" isn't relevant anymore. Premise: A janitor with a criminal past, framed and arrested for drug smuggling, confronts a choice, whether to earn freedom by letting his ex-girlfriend, who framed him, get...

I know somebody who writes fan-fic stories for D&D. He says he writes genius stories. One day he wrote a screenplay. By one day, I really mean "one day" - he rewrote one of his D&D stories into screenplay format. Then, he approached a producer. The producer rejected his screenplay. This guy said...

The character has a criminal past and has even been jailed. It won't sit well if he would be addict. What I need is a situation of less than 1.5 minutes, that could have him get a suitcase/bag with drugs and get arrested, and that it couldn't happen to him if he wasn't a selfish person.

I decided to rewrite the script this way: 1) - Natali won't be Shahar's ex-wife, but an ex-girlfried. 2) - Ilana and Shahar have any connection to Avi. Avi is Natali's son 3) - Shahar has to choose, whether to gain freedom but help Natali get arrested and let Avi die, or help Natali psy for...

Probably the movie is so bad that nobody uploaded it. Where can I watch it?

Well, it's clearly not original, but you can make it good. Why don't you add some original property to the protagonist? I mean... an arrogant boy raised in a village, finds out he's the heir of the throne... okay... :( Where is the hook? What if the protagonist is a vampire himself? What if...

If I make Avi NOT Ilana's son, but Shahar's and Natali's, there is something I'm afraid of: 1) - If Avi is NOT mortally sick, why would Shahar help Natali and Avi escape? He can let Natali get arrested and raise Avi himself. 2) - If Avi IS mortally sick, isn't it obvious that Shahar would help...