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Thx - but I'm not supposed to give the story away am I? Shouldn't the viewer be intrigued enough to find out?

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That is shown as the movie evolves - why spell it out?

How scathing of you. Not that you don't have some relevant points. The way I work is to create then revise. There's a great quote by Goethe - that I can't remember off the top of my head but you may well know - that says to just begin a thing (perfect or not) and keep going. Relevant here...

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I'm working on my logline and reading this - http://www.twoadverbs.com/logline.pdf. Perhaps others might find it useful.

Thanks for your input, you guys are the first people who've told me they don't understand the logline, and as said, am very open to hearing suggestions on how to improve it. Not that I’m not thinking of that already.

But it is stated - it's Daniel's victim. The victim comes before whatever Daniel does that is 'unthinkable'. Your latter surmise is what's stated in the logline.

The spirit of his victim. As stated. If you can suggest a better way of saying this I'm very open to listening.

Love it! I come from the north of England too and love Danny Boyle's work so was particularly interested to see this. It gave me the creeps as I remembered the bleakness of life there - at least for me although I know people who enjoy it. This story is really interesting and I feel it'd make a...

Thx directorik. When he replies will do as you suggest. Great idea.

Thx Sweetie! Will research the difference and Pixar.

Lauran

Was listening to an interview with Trevor Engelson yesterday (it was mentioned on this site). He sounds like a cool guy to work with and is a manager - is that much the same as an agent?

Thx for your reply directorik. Actually I started writing the horror script a while ago - along with a few others which are unfinished. The most I've written on one is 70 pages of an animation script which I since heard is very difficult to sell. Does anyone know anything different about that? I...

Hi - thx for asking. The reason is that I want to make the movie myself. You can see the website at www.KillerEyesMovie.com. The latest on that is that a name actor's agent has asked to see lines for the role of Mickey Malone, the part I want the actor to play. Actually I would really like to...

Title - 'We May Have to Kill Him'. Logline - Tormented by the spirit of his victim in his wife's womb, Daniel does the unthinkable. But can that save him - or anyone else? 92 pages.

what would be a reasonable percentage/amount to give him? He previously asked me if I was interested in selling my female led action script so I thought it made sense to tell him about my horror script - he's a top entertainment lawyer. Thanks!

Good luck James.

Welcome Dan - I studied in Cambridge. Hope you enjoy the site.