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You are right, I took a liberty of giving the uncle a name :) but it is just as suggestion.

Honestly, the second revision has even less logic, so I'd stop here. Seeing painful to read your ways to justify illogical car theft and all what follows, I'd recommend you a simple way around it, just a sample, so please, never mind it. It is just a suggestion. Intro Fred can't find a job...

The breakdown is also very nice and illustrative. I use mainly Apple Motion, so I appreciate your explanations. I really liked video effects! It reminded me of popular 90s games such as Journeyman Turbo and Labyrinth of Time, both with great soundtrack. Looking forward to hear more of your...

There are quite a few movies, that put the protagonist under such pressure (debt, etc). So Kieran was beaten up by the victim of his own robbery and his creditor. Well, it was probably well deserved. Can't say anymore comments, because OK, he owes money, it is clear, he is stupid, it is clear...

hi, read the first OP post with the plot. Summarized, it sounds like that: A straigth A students steals a car from a junkyard.. and because of that, runs from police and becomes a mafia driver. You wanna make it a multiple season TV drama, as I understand. I think you received already great...

Hi, the multiple questions are indeed, necessary to ask in order to get the true visuals from the chrystal. The main difficulty of the movie is following: 1. Everybody knows how VHS or Camera footage looks like. Thats why there are various plugins and methods to recreate security camera...

Man, the music is SICK! and graphics are cool too! Too bad, I am not producing an adventure movie now, but I would be honored to work with you!

Right

Ok good just checking the background. What state is it

Is prostitution legal in the state?

So what is motive behind Clive’s intentions to setup the smuggling ring? Also, why don’t let Paper have a normal bankruptcy? Importantly, why Clive needs Papers? Make those things natural

Yes, thats for sure. Happily, I always met great DPs or it is a matter more of agreeing to follow DP's visual style, perhaps. Once genre is clear, any DP will follow the general style, I think. Once, however, I didn't like use of wide angle lens, as it kinda distorted the scene. Sign, one never...

Thats'a great suggestion. This way, no more useless characters are introduced. This now leads to Clive's character development. As of now, Clive is basically the engine behind the story development. His (bad) intentions drive everyone towards the catastrophe. You will need to describe Clive's...

I liked it!! Nice, loved how Scissor and Paper are linked together literally in the first 2 minutes.

Produce. So maybe i talked from that point of view. Like you when you produce something, for me it is important how the particular DP visualizes the story (in details), so maybe I'd pay attention more to that, so one can already imagine how a particular DP would shoot the story. I agree that...

Yes, I fully understand the point and agree. Making presentation brief and to the point is important, no arguments here.

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In the reel above, originally she mixed shots from different movies in somewhat random way (at least that was my impression). So maybe she could reedit the reel in a way that the water shots are grouped together (lets say first part of reel), the warm family shots together, the small girl shots...

Actually, all those 6 reels could be compiled together into a one reel, just like the original one. Only placement of shots will be different :) anyway, OP wanted an opinion on her reel, I shared mine, hopefully didn't result in something wrong.

Yes, that's a thing for consideration, for sure.