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I haven't seen it but that video was gorgeous so I will definitely watch it very soon! Thank you for the awesome suggestion.

I’m glad you are curious! That’s one of the few truly positive things I’ve heard so far out of this pitch lol. Here are my answers: 1)Who is the Target Demographic? You see since the goal is to truly portray Humanity from its deepest depths to the highest heights, that does mean showing the...

Thank you greatly for this feedback! This video you sent really encapsulates that grandeur I hope to portray, along with the other aspects of humanity such as minimalism. Your feedback about having a reference point is critical, it’s such an obvious thing. It reminds me of the production of...

Im thankful though that there was a lot of feedback and criticism about that so now I’m only doing the one main Humanity film and the album. After Which I re-edited that pitch into this slower one. All In all Indietalk, I'm really glad you told me these things. I see there is still much...

You are absolutely right to a certain degree except that I won’t be leaving everything up to the viewer to interpret. In the more detailed pitch I explain how I will show every view or as many worldviews as I can find exactly how those views want to be presented (to the best of my ability). So...

The man is Soulor, the main character of the films that come before Humanity which I released and this film. My most detailed character in many books I have published. What you see in this trailer is the few sides of humanity I have managed to depict so far. This being battle landscapes, fantasy...

I see that in this pitch the scale of Humanity I am trying to present isn’t being made clear. As you see this film and album is all about the dream / otherworldly aspects of Humanity just as much as the realistic parts. As I truly am trying to portray The Human mind as said in the trailer. Every...

Hi Indietalk! Sorry I realise after all this time I don’t actually know your name, I hope you are feeling well today! Thank you for reading and watching the pitch. You are right that these visuals are from my past films, in the pitch video I explain that some visuals are unfinished. Some are...

Hello Suspire! I hope you are having a nice time this day / night depending on where you are from. Thank you firstly for taking the time to watch my film pitch and for writing out your thoughts / criticism. Secondly I’m glad you think some of the graphics are nice, many are unfinished and in...

Hi everyone! Recently I posted a video on here, and on a few other sites for some feedback. Thankfully I received some great criticism on and off Indietalk. Due to this criticism I have completely re-done my proof of concept film / pitch. I have slowed the visual pacing, re-done the musical...

Thanks! I Appreciate that Friend.

NOTICE: THIS THREAD HAS BEEN UPDATED IN A NEW THREAD, THIS PITCH IS NO LONGER VALID Hi! I am Asher Pike. A young Australian man who is participating in a race. The Human race. I am an artist, and this is HUMANITY: (Video Trailer / Pitch Link): Every aspect of that word, the vast histories...

What an amazing short film my friend! You gave some great insight and really stunned me with the visuals you pulled off. It must have been amazing to create this short and see it completed. The Timelapse, gopro footage and drone shots really worked well together. Keep it up so we can see more...

Th This is really awesome my friend! To see this project develop over time has been amazing, the visuals are really taking hold. The concept is great, the prize premise etc. There is still much to do as is being pointed out, overall though just keep asking for feedback, keep improving and this...

Damn this sounds like a bit of a hassle over there, I would take “Documentary label’s" advice though. (Sorry I don’t know your name). Better safe than sorry incase your film blows up. As the saying goes never assume luck is on your side and luck will be on your side.

To put the concept into more concise words: The Humanity Movie is going to be an experience that artistically visualises all the records of everything humanity has ever put forth. Be it myth, history or discovery, every viewpoint will be presented equally as one experience with the viewer left...

Thank you for saying that and for taking interest, you are right I find that validation from others can be less to the point than the journey of making an artistic work. As for what this film will be about, well, I guess it’s going to be about everything. Every historical event, every proposed...

Hello again my filmmaking friends, Asher here. As you can tell by the title this is just crazy i know, basically I’m gonna attempt visualising the entire history of Humanity including all the myths and legends in the span of 1000-2000 Arthouse shots. The visual style I will use will be...

Reception Update: Im glad to say that this film has been featured by 20 online social media pages! These are suicide awareness and motivation organisations / communities which helped spread the message of this film for free! It was really amazing to have their help for this cause. The film was...

Oh my friend I freak out just as much as you aha, it’s just that sometimes I’m a little tune deaf to What I make lmao so I think it sounds better when in reality it doesn’t. But practice may help with that. Also finished my film! Posted in a new thread if u wanna see it.