Wow, very impressive for only 20 hours. I really did laugh a few times at the small details. Like the bad guy in the mask grabbing back the cookies, and in the beginning when your main character I think stops and smells the roses. Thanks for the laughs!
Being brutally honest, you guys have a lot to work on. I think they all need to be worked on equally. Acting, camera work, story, lighting, editing. That sounds awful, but at least you guys are starting somewhere. Now its only better from there.
(I only watched the first one) The acting was ok, camera work was fine, but you really need to get interesting. Usually after 4 mins I'd be done, but I gave it the benefit of the doubt and kept watching. Really need something more to hook the attention of the viewer. Not that it was boring just...