Recent content by prking

I agree, nobody does, and thats funny to me. Let's not forget our protaganist is pretty high at the moment too :P @MARALYN I wrote this so I could shoot it for free (small cast, locations, props etc.) and get some practice. That is why it is so short, and in the YouTube Generation people...

The link takes you to a PDF, and it is (supposedly) viewable to the public

This is a very, very short (2.5 pages) thriller I wrote. Give it a read, and let me know what you think! Synopsis: A 20 year old witnesses a murder from his home. I currently have it titled "Noodle" cause, well, it's funny to me, if you think of something better let me know...

FantasySciFi thanks for spending the time to leave such detailed feedback. As I said this is my first crack at screenwriting, so I take no offense in the criticism what so ever. Thank you for it! I really like your suggestion on making it more non-linear. I do not have the current intentions...

Thanks mthompsonfilms for the read and feedback. I agree the shootout scene was definitely the scene I had the most trouble writing, and needs some change done to it Once agin thanks for the read and the Feedback!

Sorry I'm new! This one should work!

This is my first short that I have ever written, and any feedback would be very helpful. Crime/Comedy 14 pages The plot revolves around 3 college aged friends who find a bag of drugs and money, and quickly fall in way over their heads in the dangerous world of the drug trade. As of now I...